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As Ash, Dawn and Brock headed to Pastoria City, for Ash’s gym battle and Dawn’s contest, they passed through a swamp, which was rumored to have many strange pokemon.
“It’s kinda creepy here,” Dawn remarked.
“It’ll be fine,” Brock assured her.
“Yeah, besides we might find some cool new pokemon,” Ash said enthusiastically.
“Yeah, I guess you’re right. Piplup, what about you, ready to catch some pokemon?” Dawn asked.
“PIPLUP!” Piplup said, cheerfully.
“You ready Pikachu?” Ash asked.
“PIKA!” It replied.

They walked through the swamp for an hour, when all of the sudden the side of the mountain they were on caved in and Ash, slid down the hill side. Luckily he was able to hang on to a tree with his poke ball belt, but he accidentally let go and slid down the rest of the mountain, leaving his belt on the tree.
“PIKA!” Pikachu exclaimed.
“Are you okay?” Dawn yelled.
“Y-yeah, but my belt’s stuck up there!” He replied.
“That’s okay, we’ll get it,” Brock guaranteed.
“It looks like we can meet up down there!” Dawn yelled, pointing down the road, about 1 mile.
“Okay! Meet you there!” Ash said.

Ash walked about ½ mile when he noticed something behind him, but when he turned around it was gone and when he turned back around, he saw a strange looking pokemon, which looked like Tangela and Tangrowth, but it’s vines were white and some had feathered tips.

“Hey! A pokemon, I wonder what you are,” He said, getting out his pokedex. He pulled out the pokedex, letting it scan the pokemon in front of him.
“Tangtease the tickling pokemon. It is the evolved form of Tangrowth, which evolved from Tangela. This pokemon is extremely rare and very mischievous, it is known for capturing people and tickling them until they fall unconscious. It also has a special ability of controlling the plants around it,” it said.
“WHAT!?” Ash shrieked, he was about run away when, a vine leaped from the ground, grabbing his foot, causing him to fall.
Vines erupted all around him, tying him to the ground in an X formation. Tantease then used his vines to take off Ash’s vest, shirt, socks and shoes.

“NO! PLEASE! Tangtease, don’t tickle me!” Ash begged.
But the tickling pokemon didn’t listen and started using his feather tipped vines to tickle Ash’s flanks and stomach and the non-feathered ones to tickle his armpits and ribs.
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! NOOOOOOOOOO! PLEEEEEASE! TANGTEASE! AHA HAHAHAHAHAHA! STAAAHAHAHAHAP! I’M TOO TICKLISH! AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Ash shouted, howling with laughter.
Tangtease kept tickling Ash’s upper-body, alternating from his more ticklish stomach and flanks to his less ticklish pits and sides, even swirling a feather tipped vine in his belly-button. After doing that, he started to knead Ash’s hips, which made ash buck and jerk around in his restrains.
“NOOOOOOO! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA PLEEEEEEEASE! STAAAHAHAHAHAP! AAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOOOOOT THE BELLY BUTTON! AAAAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! PLEEEEEASE! STAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP!” Ash screamed.

Tantease stopped; pulled away it’s vines and walked toward the 14-year-old’s (I think he’s 14 anyway, not sure) restrained bare feet.
“NO! NOT MY FEET! PLEASE TANGTEASE PLEEASE! I’LL DO ANYTHING PLEASE!” Ash pleaded.
But all Tangtease cared about was tickling his feet and that’s exactly what he did. He used all of his tentacles, normal and feather-tipped to tickle all over Ash’s insanely ticklish feet, especially on his arches and under the toes. And to really drive him nuts, Tangtease dragged his feather-tipped vines in and out between his toes, causing him to explode with laughter.
“NOOOOOOOOO! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA! PLEEEEEEEEEEASE! STAHAHAP!
I CAN’T TAKE IT! AAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA STAHAHAHAHAP TANGTEASE! PLEEEEEEEASE!
NOOOOOO! NOT THE TOES! AAAAAAAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! STAAHAHAHAHAP! I’M GONNA DIE! HAHAHAHA! I… HAHAHA I… HAHAHAHA I… HAHAHA Ugh…” The teen trainer screeched, finally falling into unconsciousness, Tangtease release ash from the vines, but instead of leaving sat at his feet and continued to tickle his unconscious captive.

After the hour of tickling Ash had fainted and Dawn, Brock and Pikachu, went to find him, they eventually did, but saw Tangtease so they stopped to analyze it.
“Tangtease the tickling pokemon…” the pokedex began again, hearing this Tangtease darted off. They carried Ash to camp, but unfortunately could only find his shirt and vest. About 30 min after he fell unconscious.
“HEY! WHAT?! Where am I? Oh, Dawn, Brock where are we?” Ash asked.
“Well, rescued you from Tangtease and were waiting till you woke,” Brock said.
“By the way, we found your shirt and vest, but not your shoes or socks,” Dawn said.
“That’s okay, I guess,” Ash said.
“Soo… howticklishareyourfeet?” Dawn said really quickly putting Ash’s feet in a headlock and tickling his soles and toes with the other hand.
Because of this Ash burst out with laughter screaming, “NOOOOOO! PLEEEASE! I’VE HAD ENOUGH TICKLING FOR TODAY! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA DAWN! NOT MY FEEEET! AAAAA AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA…
I realized no ones done a story on Ash so... yeah.
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:iconstangebabe27:
stangebabe27 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Student Photographer
Poor Ash...I feel for him!  I wouldn't wanna stumble across a TangTease...
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SSJ3Adean Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Writer
Alright that has gotta suck for him. The end was really cute though
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Writer
Haha, yeah I bet. And thanks :D
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SSJ3Adean Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Writer
No prob. Not too much a fan of male tickling but this thing was really cute so you can say it's an acception 
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PewdiepieGamer360 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Oh my god I wish I had a Tangtease! Then I can get my friend Jada! >:)
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Bragathus Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I remember reading a fanfic on writing.com once that featured Misty tickling Ash, was a really good one, but it seems to have disappeared :/
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my gosh! Yes!!! I loved that one. It was so incredible... *sigh* but you're right it is gone.
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Waterbender1996 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
good story
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jedizombie77 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
draw this!
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Student Writer
Ah! I wish I could~!
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Valsonic01 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
I wonder if he had to continue on barefoot until they reached the next town...
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student Writer
It'd sure make things more interesting ;D
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m0urningwerw0lf27 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011
hehehe....
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Student Writer
=D
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Flakchen Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
awww poor guy!
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2011  Student Writer
Lol true! But ya kno u love it =P
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Flakchen Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2011  Student Digital Artist
hehe :giggle: youre right!
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011  Student Writer
=D
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Flakchen Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
^^
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puppydog66 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010
Ash is 11....
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011  Student Writer
Ooh well, idk cuz he started out @ 10, so like here is what the fourth, fifth journey thing? And they nvr rly say the age and often say things like remember last yr? So idk, plus I just would rather have him @ that age
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puppydog555 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2010
Good job!You did an awesome......!:)
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2010  Student Writer
thanx a bunch!
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puppydog555 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2010  Student Writer
THANX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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superpokemonmaster2 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010
sweet
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010  Student Writer
thanx
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superpokemonmaster2 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010
FUNNY I LOVE IT p.s he's 10
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010  Student Writer
Thanx! Glad you enjoyed it and yeah, but like... not the entire time, just in the beginning. I mean i remember a couple times they said it's been a year since.... so... idk :lol:
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Stunktank Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
HEH HEH Gland Im not Ash!
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010  Student Writer
Haha :lol:
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Stunktank Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010
heh heh
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Redrodents Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2009
Cute pokemon (-=
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2009  Student Writer
yep! =D
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Virthu Featured By Owner May 27, 2009
Is he really 14?
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SSJ3Adean Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Writer
No 11
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SarahChan96 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2010
I think he's 12.
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner May 28, 2009  Student Writer
I dunno, i just put him as that age... i think he is...
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Virthu Featured By Owner May 28, 2009
Its not like most anime characters act their age BD
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner May 29, 2009  Student Writer
true =D
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Virthu Featured By Owner May 28, 2009
Its not like most anime characters act their age BD
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Icequeen4657 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2009
nice job! It would be cool if Tangtease actually was a pokemon. . . .great story!
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009  Student Writer
yeah, i know =D thanx
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Icequeen4657 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009
your welcome.
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Ticklishpitguy Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
Ooooh! This sounds really good!
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noneya1234 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
there definately need to be more of him getting it
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008  Student Writer
definitely
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lolcakeswtfbbq Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
im making one right now :).
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badass000000 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
Nice, u seem to always get the characters personalitys pretty dead on, and that always makes the storys seem much more realistic.
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beastofthenight Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
great story!
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