As Ash, Dawn and Brock headed to Pastoria City, for Ashs gym battle and Dawns contest, they passed through a swamp, which was rumored to have many strange pokemon.
Its kinda creepy here, Dawn remarked.
Itll be fine, Brock assured her.
Yeah, besides we might find some cool new pokemon, Ash said enthusiastically.
Yeah, I guess youre right. Piplup, what about you, ready to catch some pokemon? Dawn asked.
PIPLUP! Piplup said, cheerfully.
You ready Pikachu? Ash asked.
PIKA! It replied.
They walked through the swamp for an hour, when all of the sudden the side of the mountain they were on caved in and Ash, slid down the hill side. Luckily he was able to hang on to a tree with his poke ball belt, but he accidentally let go and slid down the rest of the mountain, leaving his belt on the tree.
PIKA! Pikachu exclaimed.
Are you okay? Dawn yelled.
Y-yeah, but my belts stuck up there! He replied.
Thats okay, well get it, Brock guaranteed.
It looks like we can meet up down there! Dawn yelled, pointing down the road, about 1 mile.
Okay! Meet you there! Ash said.
Ash walked about ½ mile when he noticed something behind him, but when he turned around it was gone and when he turned back around, he saw a strange looking pokemon, which looked like Tangela and Tangrowth, but its vines were white and some had feathered tips.
Hey! A pokemon, I wonder what you are, He said, getting out his pokedex. He pulled out the pokedex, letting it scan the pokemon in front of him.
Tangtease the tickling pokemon. It is the evolved form of Tangrowth, which evolved from Tangela. This pokemon is extremely rare and very mischievous, it is known for capturing people and tickling them until they fall unconscious. It also has a special ability of controlling the plants around it, it said.
WHAT!? Ash shrieked, he was about run away when, a vine leaped from the ground, grabbing his foot, causing him to fall.
Vines erupted all around him, tying him to the ground in an X formation. Tantease then used his vines to take off Ashs vest, shirt, socks and shoes.
NO! PLEASE! Tangtease, dont tickle me! Ash begged.
But the tickling pokemon didnt listen and started using his feather tipped vines to tickle Ashs flanks and stomach and the non-feathered ones to tickle his armpits and ribs.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! NOOOOOOOOOO! PLEEEEEASE! TANGTEASE! AHA HAHAHAHAHAHA! STAAAHAHAHAHAP! IM TOO TICKLISH! AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Ash shouted, howling with laughter.
Tangtease kept tickling Ashs upper-body, alternating from his more ticklish stomach and flanks to his less ticklish pits and sides, even swirling a feather tipped vine in his belly-button. After doing that, he started to knead Ashs hips, which made ash buck and jerk around in his restrains.
NOOOOOOO! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA PLEEEEEEEASE! STAAAHAHAHAHAP! AAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOOOOOT THE BELLY BUTTON! AAAAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! PLEEEEEASE! STAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP! Ash screamed.
Tantease stopped; pulled away its vines and walked toward the 14-year-olds (I think hes 14 anyway, not sure) restrained bare feet.
NO! NOT MY FEET! PLEASE TANGTEASE PLEEASE! ILL DO ANYTHING PLEASE! Ash pleaded.
But all Tangtease cared about was tickling his feet and thats exactly what he did. He used all of his tentacles, normal and feather-tipped to tickle all over Ashs insanely ticklish feet, especially on his arches and under the toes. And to really drive him nuts, Tangtease dragged his feather-tipped vines in and out between his toes, causing him to explode with laughter.
NOOOOOOOOO! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA! PLEEEEEEEEEEASE! STAHAHAP!
I CANT TAKE IT! AAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA STAHAHAHAHAP TANGTEASE! PLEEEEEEEASE!
NOOOOOO! NOT THE TOES! AAAAAAAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! STAAHAHAHAHAP! IM GONNA DIE! HAHAHAHA! I
The teen trainer screeched, finally falling into unconsciousness, Tangtease release ash from the vines, but instead of leaving sat at his feet and continued to tickle his unconscious captive.
After the hour of tickling Ash had fainted and Dawn, Brock and Pikachu, went to find him, they eventually did, but saw Tangtease so they stopped to analyze it.
Tangtease the tickling pokemon
the pokedex began again, hearing this Tangtease darted off. They carried Ash to camp, but unfortunately could only find his shirt and vest. About 30 min after he fell unconscious.
HEY! WHAT?! Where am I? Oh, Dawn, Brock where are we? Ash asked.
Well, rescued you from Tangtease and were waiting till you woke, Brock said.
By the way, we found your shirt and vest, but not your shoes or socks, Dawn said.
Thats okay, I guess, Ash said.
howticklishareyourfeet? Dawn said really quickly putting Ashs feet in a headlock and tickling his soles and toes with the other hand.
Because of this Ash burst out with laughter screaming, NOOOOOO! PLEEEASE! IVE HAD ENOUGH TICKLING FOR TODAY! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA DAWN! NOT MY FEEEET! AAAAA AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I realized no ones done a story on Ash so... yeah.
Poor Ash...I feel for him! I wouldn't wanna stumble across a TangTease...
Alright that has gotta suck for him. The end was really cute though
Haha, yeah I bet. And thanks
Oh my god I wish I had a Tangtease! Then I can get my friend Jada! >
I remember reading a fanfic on writing.com once that featured Misty tickling Ash, was a really good one, but it seems to have disappeared :/
Oh my gosh! Yes!!! I loved that one. It was so incredible... *sigh* but you're right it is gone.
I wonder if he had to continue on barefoot until they reached the next town...
awww poor guy!
Ash is 11....
Ooh well, idk cuz he started out @ 10, so like here is what the fourth, fifth journey thing? And they nvr rly say the age and often say things like remember last yr? So idk, plus I just would rather have him @ that age
Good job!You did an awesome......!
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FUNNY I LOVE IT p.s he's 10
Thanx! Glad you enjoyed it and yeah, but like... not the entire time, just in the beginning. I mean i remember a couple times they said it's been a year since.... so... idk
HEH HEH Gland Im not Ash!
Cute pokemon (-=
Is he really 14?
I think he's 12.
I dunno, i just put him as that age... i think he is...
nice job! It would be cool if Tangtease actually was a pokemon. . . .great story!
Ooooh! This sounds really good!
there definately need to be more of him getting it
Nice, u seem to always get the characters personalitys pretty dead on, and that always makes the storys seem much more realistic.