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This story is a Naruto tickling one-shot and is dated pre-shippuden, just before the Chunin exams, so yes, Sasuke’s still there.


Naruto sat atop his apartment, sighing as he wondered how Sakura was doing on her mission.
“Why did Grandma Tsunade have to send all the girls out on a mission!?” Naruto yelled to himself.
He was annoyed, not only because he missed Sakura, but also because tonight was a festival and he was planning on asking Sakura. He sighed wondering if he should go himself or just stay home.
Maybe I should ask some of the guys if they wanna go…’  Naruto thought, leaping onto his feet and jumping to the ground.
He walked around town looking for his friends when he found Kiba training with Akamaru at the park.
“GO AKAMARU!” Kiba yelled, pointing towards the sky.
The little dog jumped, bouncing off a tree and flying over Naruto’s head, spinning in the air while his pee splashed of Naruto’s face.
“AAACK! KIBA!” Naruto yelled, frantically wiping the warm moisture off his face and jacket.
“Hahaha! Good one Akamaru!” Kiba said laughing as he threw Naruto a towel.
Naruto growled, sopping up the rest of the pee and glaring angrily at Kiba.
“So what’d you want?” Kiba asked catching the towel as Naruto threw it back.
“Oh, right. Well, I was thinkin…” Naruto began.
“You were thinking!?” Kiba asked shocked.
Haha. I was thinking we could get like Shikamaru and Sasuke and see go to the festival together since all the girls are gone,” Naruto finished, rolling his eyes.
“Oh, yeah I forgot about the festival,” Kiba lied, “ Yeah, I guess that sounds cool, what time should we meet there?”
I wish I had forgotten! I was planning on asking Hinata…’ Kiba sighed as Naruto kept talking.
“Kiba!?” Naruto yelled, pinching his nose.
“What? Huh?” Kiba said, coming out of his trance.
“Sheesh. I was saying that we should meet up at the festival gate at 8, ‘kay?” Naruto repeated.
“Oh yeah, 8. Sounds great,” Kiba said waving as he walked off with Akamaru at his heels.
What’s his problem?’ Naruto asked jumping off.



He jumped around town, ending at the water tower he usually came to when he was looking for something. He put his hand over his eyes, blocking the bright sun as he searched of Shikamaru or Sasuke. After a few minutes his eyes landed on Shikamaru’s feet, poking out from under the large awning on the top of a nearby building.
Of course! Why didn't I check there! Shikamaru’s always sitting there watching the clouds!’ Naruto thought jumping towards him as he shook his head.
“Hey Shikamaru!” Naruto yelled landing on the rooftop and walking over to his lazy friend.
“Oh, hey Naruto. What’s up?” Shikamaru asked, not even looking up.
“Kiba and I are going to the festival tonight and we wanted to know if you’d come,” Naruto explained.
“A festival? Lots of people. Lots of walking. Such a drag…” Shikamaru said, his voice trailing off.
“Aww, come on Shikamaru! You never do anything! Just sit here and watch the clouds!” Naruto complained.
“And you do way to much. You’re way to hyper,” Shikamaru sighed, still watching the sky.
“Fine!” Naruto said, begging to walk off.
Suddenly he stopped, remembering something he’d been waiting to use.
“Hey Shikamaru! If you don’t come then I’ll tell Temari who it was that sent her those flowers and candy last Valentines day!” Naruto threatened, grinning.
Shikamaru froze.
He’d seen that!? Darn … I knew Valentines Day was a drag…’ Shikamaru sighed, sitting up on the bench.
“Fine Naruto, you win. What time should I meet you guys?” Shikamaru asked.
Naruto jumped into the air, punching it enthusiastically.
“Be at the gate at eight!” Naruto yelled, already leaping off the building.
“Naruto… what a drag…” Shikamaru sighed, laying back down.



Sasuke was where he usually was, training in a small area in the forest, close to his old home in the heart of the Uchiha Clan’s territory. He threw kunai at the target board, each time hitting the center. After awhile he got bored, so he sat down against a rock and drifted off to sleep.
“SASUKE!?” Naruto shouted, standing right above the rock Sasuke was sleeping on.
“WHAT!? WHO’S THERE!? NARUTOO!” Sasuke yelled, jumping to his feet, “What are you doing here idiot!?”
“Humph! I was just looking for you!” Naruto yelled back, sliding down the rock and next to his teammate.
“What for?” Sasuke asked, leaning against a rock.
“Shikamaru, Kiba and I are going to the fair tonight and I wanted to know if you’d come,” Naruto said in an annoyed voice.
“Why would I want to do that!?” Sasuke barked.
“I dunno!? Maybe cause you’ve got nothin’ else to do!” Naruto yelled back.
“That’s not true! I was planning on going to the stupid festival tonight anyway!” Sasuke argued.
“YEAH WELL …wait, you were?” Naruto asked, suddenly grinning slyly, “With who?”
“Wha- who says I needed someone to go with!?” Sasuke asked defensively.
“You were gonna go by yourself?” Naruto asked.
“No! I… I was going to ask someone…” Sasuke blurted out, his cheeks becoming slightly pink.
“Who?” Naruto asked.
“I… I… umm….” Sasuke stuttered.



“It was Ino wasn’t it? You were gonna ask out Ino!” Naruto exclaimed laughing.
“What!? N-no! No I wasn’t!” Sasuke said, trying to cover his slip up as his blush became more apparent.



Naruto was now on the ground, rolling back and forth as held his sides.
“Waahahait till I teehehell eveheheryone!” Naruto said, trying to hold back his laughter.
“No! I mean… I’ll go…” Sasuke grumbled.
“What?” Naruto asked, holding his hand to his ear.
“…I’ll go…” Sasuke mumbled again.
“I didn’t quite catch that,” Naruto teased, moving closer.
“I’LL GO!” Sasuke yelled.
“Hmm… not good enough. I want you to beg me to come,” Naruto said.
“What? You’ve gotta be kidding,” Sasuke asked.
“Nope. Hands and knees, beg,” Naruto replied.
Sasuke fumed, dropping to his hands and knees and pleading, “Please Naruto…”
“Oh great and wonderful Naruto.”
“What!?”
“Address me as, ‘Oh great and wonderful Naruto’,”
“Fine. Oh Great. And wonderful Naruto. Can I come…”
“Can I PLEASE come.”
“CAN I P-L-E-A-S-E COME. To the fair with you tonight.”
Naruto laughed, motioning for Sasuke to get up, which he did, quickly.
“Alright, you can come. And I won’t tell anyone about you and… haha and… haha and Ino,” Naruto promised, walking away from the raven haired boy, “Be there at 8!”
“Damn Naruto and his stupid… stupidness!” Sasuke yelled as he grabbed another kunai and threw it at the board.



The sunset and the moon rose and soon it was time for the guys to meet up. Naruto walked along the brightly lit pathway, headed towards the festival, his blue sandals taping against the stone with each step. Naruto was wearing his usual summer clothes, a dark blue t-shirt, a pair of bright orange shorts and a thin orange vest to match. He looked around, spotting Shikamaru and Kiba standing by the festival gate. He ran over, waving excited for the night.
“Hey guys!” Naruto exclaimed.
“Hey Naruto. Is this it, or did you as someone else to come?” Shikamaru asked.
“Nah, Sasuke should be here soon,” Naruto replied, leaning against the wall.
A few minutes later Sasuke arrived and they entered the fair, some of them, hoping for a night of fun. The four ninja walked around, looking at the many booths and rides they could do. They argued for a little while, finally that they’d go find a booth that looked cool. They walked around the row of booths, coming to one on the end with a large crowd in front of it. They ran up to it, fighting to get to the front.
“ATTENTION LADIES AND GENTLEMAN! WE ARE GIVING AWAY 50 DOLLARS! TO THE LUCKY PERSON WHO CAN WITHSTAND OUR CHALLENGE!” A red-haired woman said.
“What!?” Naruto exclaimed, his mouth dropping and his arm shooting up.
“Do you even no what they’re asking you to do?” Shikamaru asked, rolling his eyes.
“I don’t care! I can endure anything! AND I WANT 50 DOLLARS!” Naruto yelled, running up to the stage, “I CAN DO IT!”
The woman laughed, looking down at the young genin, “Really!? Alright then! Five dollars to play and 50 dollars if you win!”
“Okay! What do I have to do!?” Naruto asked.
“If your sure, take off your sandals and jacket and sit here,” She instructed.
Naruto bent over, pulling off his shoes and unzipping his jacket, dropping them by the stool. He sat down, waiting as the woman and her assistant pulled a large pair of stocks in front of him. She lifted the middle level, opening the wholes for Naruto’s feet. As soon as Naruto saw the stocks he got nervous, but one look at the three ninja watching below allowed him to stuff his feet into the slots. The woman lifted the top plank and Naruto put his hands into the holes hoping she wasn't going to do what he thought she was.



“Alright, kid, all ya have to do to get the 50 dollars is get tickled for 10 minutes with you saying ‘I forfeit’. Got it?” The lady asked.
Naruto’s eyes widened, realizing what he had signed up for.
“Umm… is it to late to… leave?” He whispered, trying not to let the crowd hear.
“Yep! But don’t worry! You’re just gonna be tickled! You’re not to ticklish, right?” She said, smiling.
“R-right! I’m… I’m n-not t-ticklish,” Naruto stuttered, closing his eyes.
“Alright! Let’s go!”
She walked behind the blonde ninja, already digging her fingers into his sides. Naruto jerked, squirming as he tried not to laugh.
“Ooh, playing tough, eh?” She asked smiling as she moved upwards into Naruto’s armpits.
He jumped, little giggles escaping his mouth as he tried to get away from the tickling fingers. She reached around, pulling up his shirt and tickling his soft bare stomach with her long nails. Naruto broke, unable to hold it in any longer. The giggles became steady, growing louder with every minute.
“Ahahahahahahahahahahaha! Waaahahahahahahait noohohohot theeehehehehehehere! Eeehehehehehehehe!” Naruto giggled as the woman scribbled her fingers closer and closer to his naval. She stopped tickling with one hand, holding it out and calling for her assistant who walked over, handing her two long stiff feathers. She placed the feathers on his stomach, moving them around in circular motions, slowly moving them towards his bellybutton.
“Aahahahahhahahahahahahahahahaha! Noooohohohohohoohot theeehehehehehehehe feeeheheheheheheheatheehehehehers!
Pleeehehehehehehehehehease! Aaaaahahahahahah! Nooohohohohohohoho! Dohohohohohohohohohon’t tihihihihickle theeeheheeeheheheheehere! AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Naruto shouted, his laughter going up an octave as she swirled the feathers in Naruto’s naval.
The woman dropped the feathers, going back to tickling his stomach with fingers tickling right above his waistline.
“AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! STOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOP PLEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHASE!” Naruto begged, as the woman continued to tickle him.
“If you want it to stop, all you have to do is say, I forfeit, but if you do you get zip! And all your friends will think you’re a wimp!” The woman said, giving him a short break as she stood up.
Naruto looked out at the crowd, who by now were all laughing and then down at his friends. Shikamaru sat on a bench shaking his head as he watched Kiba rolling on the ground holding his sides. Sasuke stood beside him, chuckling himself at Naruto’s predicament.



“No! I won’t quit!” Naruto said.
I can take a little tickling! Right? Yeah! As long as she doesn’t tickle… there…’ Naruto thought.
“Alright, let’s try somewhere else,” She said, walking over to pair of feet the protruded out of the bottom of the stocks.
“Wait! Umm… c-can’t you… just keep tickling up here?” Naruto asked as the woman looked at him and eyebrow raised.
“Ticklish here?” She asked, dragging a nail up his foot.
He twitched giggling from the one touch.
“Ahaha yeeeheheheheah! So can you… umm… you know?” He pleaded.
“Nope sorry, but hey only four more minutes!” She said smiling as she lowered her fingers to the heels of his feet.
Her nails touched his sole, causing him to jump. She dragged them upwards, over his arch as Naruto immediately burst into full-blown laughter.
“AAH! AhahahaHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! NOOOOOHOHOHOHOOHOHOHOHOT THEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE FEEEEEEEEHEHEHEHEEHEHEEHEHEHEHEHET! PLEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEASE! AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAhAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! THEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEY’RE TOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO TIHIHIHIHIHCKLIHIHIHIHIHIHISH! PLEEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEASE!” Naruto screamed, begging for her to stop.
“Just say the words and I’ll stop!” She said.
Come on kid! Don’t crack! I could tickle you all day!’ She thought concentrating on his hyper ticklish arches before moving to the less ticklish balls of his feet.
“NOOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO I WOOOHOHOHOHOHON’T GIVE IN! AAAAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! NOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOT THEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE AAAHAHAHAHAHARCHES! AAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA!” Naruto begged, bucking around inside the stocks.
The woman smiled, taking one hand and tickling underneath the boy’s toes while using the other to saw a feather between the toes of his other foot.
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! NOOOOOOHOHOHOOHOHOHOHOHOHOOHOHO! PLEEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEASE! STAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP I CAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAN’T TAAAAAHAHAHAHAHHAHAKE IT! PLEEEEHEHEHEHEHHEHEHEASE! STAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP!  I FOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHORFEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEIT! PLEEEHEHEHEHEHEASE JUST STAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP!”  Naruto howled, completely caving in.
“Aww, that’s two bad. You only had two and a half minutes left!” His tickler sighed, unlocking the stocks and letting his hands and feet out.
Naruto stood up, blushing with embarrassing as he grabbed his stuff putting them on and walking down the stairs. He walked over to his friends, looking down at the ground to try to hide his bright red face.



The guys stood in front of him, Sasuke chuckling openly while Kiba fought back real laughter. Shikamaru on the other hand just seemed embarrassed himself.
“Who knew you were… SUCH A GIRL!” Kiba exclaimed bursting into laughter.
“I AM NOT! I’M JUST… ticklish…” Naruto replied, blushing harder.
“Oh, just stop Kiba. So what if he’s ticklish,” Shikamaru said, rolling his eyes.
“Yeah, it’s great that he’s ticklish. Now whenever I need him to do something, I just…” Sasuke began, appearing behind him and digging his fingers into the blonde ninja’s sides.
Naruto’s immediately began laughing, collapsing to the ground to get away from Sasuke’s tickling fingers.
“AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA! SAAHAHAHAHSUKEEHEHEHE!” Naruto yelled, kicking his hands away, “Don’t do that!”
“Or what?” Sasuke asked.
“Or I’ll…” Naruto began standing up when Sasuke remember why he even came.
“Okay! I’m sorry, let’s… just do something else…” Sasuke said, turning around.
“Hmm… he’s got something on you too, huh?” Shikamaru asked.
“Yep,” Sasuke replied as they started walking.
“Well I can still make fun of him!” Kiba said laughing.
After a few more minutes, Kiba stopped and the guys walked around the fair, looking for something else to do.
“Hey, how about this? It’s a magic show,” Kiba suggested, walking inside the small tent.
“Sure,” Naruto agreed, following him.
“Whatever,” Shikamaru added, walking through the curtain as Sasuke followed closely behind.



“WELCOME! ONE AND ALL! TO THE MAGICAL MUMBO’S SHOW!” The magician said, his long black cloak swaying from the breeze.
The guys sat down in one of the front rows wondering if this was gonna be any good.
“I am Mumbo! And Tonight I will attempt to amaze you with wondrous tricks and glorious magic!” Mumbo said, throwing his hands in the air as doves flew out of his sleeves.
The crowd applauded, waiting for his so called “wondrous tricks.” As the show went on Mumbo’s tricks got more and more complicated, from pulling a rabbit out of his hat to teleporting across the stage. After about 30 minutes of tricks, the show seemed to be winding down.
“AND NOW! FOR MY LAST TRICK!” Mumbo began, the spotlight circling around the audience, “I NEED A VOLUNTEER FROM THE AUDIENCE”
Mumbo looked amongst the crowd, his eyes falling on the small group of genin in the front of the tent. He saw Naruto, jumping up and down, his hand in the air, Shikamaru who looked slightly less bored that usual and Sasuke who actually looked almost impressed. Finally he saw Kiba who was sitting back on the bench, staring at the top of the tent, completely bored out of his mind.
“YOU THERE!” Mumbo announced, pointing to Kiba who was now illuminated by the spotlight.
“Me?” Kiba asked, pointing to himself.
“YES! YOU NINJA OF THE HIDDEN LEAF! COME UP HERE AND ASSIST ME WITH MY NEXT TRICK!” Mumbo said.
Kiba got up, walking onto the stage, his arms crossed behind his head.
“Alright, what do I have to do?” He asked.
“LILY!” Mumbo yelled.
A tall, blonde women walked onto the stage, pushing a large rectangular box in front of her.
“Thank you Lily!” Mumbo said, bowing to her slightly as she did the same.
“Oh! The old cut in half trick?” Kiba asked noticing the two hole at the bottom of the box.
“Why yes! It is! But I promise you, this is nothing like what you’ve seen before!” Mumbo promised as Lily opened the box.



“Do you see anyway for us to add another person to this box?” Mumbo asked.
“…umm… no,” Kiba said, still not convinced.
“Alright then! Let us begin! Please get inside of the box!” Mumbo exclaimed, motioning him forwards.
Kiba walked in front of it, hopping in and laying back. Lily closed the box, leaving only Kiba’s feet and head protruding from the box.
Hmm… there really isn’t anyone else in here, or even a pair of plastic feet!’ Kiba said to himself.
“Alright then! Are you ready?” Mumbo asked.
“Y-yeah… you… you’re sure its safe, right?” Kiba asked.
“Afraid are you!?” Mumbo teased.
“No! I’m great!” Kiba argued, his face flushing pink.
“Okay then!” Mumbo said, “Lily, the blades if you please.”
“Of course,” Lily said, handing him two large blades, each one at least an inch thick.
“And now… PREPARE TO BE AMAZED!” Mumbo exclaimed, sliding the blades down the middle of the box.
Suspenseful drums played in the background and Mumbo through apart the box, each half sliding across the stage a few feet.
Lily brought them together, Kiba’s feet directly beside his head. He wiggled his toes experimentally and they moved perfectly, exactly as he wanted.
“And now of course! The PROOF!” Mumbo said, motioning for Lily to begin.



The blonde-headed assistant walked over to Kiba’s feet, her own high heels smacking against the wooden floor. She grabbed the heels of his shoes, pulling them off his feet and lying them on top of the box. She turned the boxes so his head and newly bared feet faced the audience, who all moved in closer, leaning off their seats to get a better view. Suddenly and without warning Lily scribbled her bright red fingernails along Kiba’s soles moving from the heels to the toes. He jerked his head back and forth, laughing from the unexpected tickling, his toes wiggling frantically as his disembodied legs rattled in their box.
“AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! STAAAHAHAHAHAHAP!
WHAAAAHAHAHAHAHAT AHAHAHAHARE YOHOHOHOHOHOU DOOHOHOHOING!?” Kiba yelled through his laughter.
The entire crowed gasped, all except Naruto who was to caught up in the fact that Kiba was ticklish to think about anything else.
“YOU SEE HE IS LAUGHING! EVEN THOUGH HIS FEET ARE DETACHED HE CAN FEEL THE TICKLING!” Mumbo yelled, “BUT FOR THE SCEPTICS OUT THERE… LILY!”
“Right!” Lily replied, taking the top half of the box and pushing it forwards so that Kiba could no longer see his wiggling feet.
“AND NOW! NOT ONLY ARE THEY ATTCHED, BUT HE CAN NOT SEE THEM EITHER!” Mumbo explained.
Lily waited a few minutes and then wiggled her fingers all over Kiba’s tan soles.
“AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! STAAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAP PLEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEASE! NOOOHOHOOHOHOHOHOOHOHOHOT THIS! AHAHAHAHAHAHA!”
Kiba howled, laughing extremely hard.
“AS YOU CAN SEE NOT ONLY IS THIS BOY VERY TICKLISH! BUT ALSO TRULY SPLIT IN HALF!” Mumbo yelled.



The crowd applauded and Lily brought the boxes together again. Mumbo pulled out the swords and Kiba was let out. He grabbed his shoes, pulling them on as she stumbled down the stairs. He walked over to Naruto and the others ashamed of himself.
“Who’s the girl now!?” Naruto teased, making Kiba blush harder.
“Yeah, well you’re still way more ticklish me!” Kiba argued.
“Maybe, but you were only tickled on the feet! What about here!?” Naruto asked, pushing his hands under Kiba’s jacket and shirt and tickling his stomach.
“AAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! NAAAAAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHARUTOOOHOHOOHOHOHOHO! NOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOT THEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHE STOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOMAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHACH!” Kiba pleaded as Naruto tickled his most ticklish spot.
Kiba dug his fingers into Naruto’s sides, trying to stop the tickling.
“Aaaahahahahahhahahaha! Heeehehehehehehehehehey!” Naruto giggled, pulling his hands back to protect his sides.
They tickled each other for a few minutes until Shikamaru decided to intervene.
“If you two girls are done, why don’t we go do something else!” Shikamaru said, rolling his eyes again.
“Fine!” Kiba and Naruto said, simultaneously pulling back their hands.
“Good,” Sasuke agreed, “Now, what are we gonna do next?”
“This!” Naruto yelled, quickly tickling Kiba’s belly with full force and running off.
“HEEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEY! NARUTO!” Kiba yelled angrily after his laughter.
“HAHA! CATCH ME IF YOU CAN!” He yelled running in between to booths.
Kiba growled, running after him as fast as he could.
“How troublesome…” Shikamaru commented, sighing as he and Sasuke followed the two slowly.



Naruto ran faster, ducking in between the crowds as Kiba struggled to follow. He ran down an alleyway, but unfortunately for him it was a dead end. Kiba appeared at the beginning of it, grinning evilly. Naruto looked around, noticing a small opening in the tent beside him. He ran through and Kiba followed, going into a small theater, where a play was already going on. Kiba stopped, just before he began tickling, not wanting to make a seen.
“You’re lucky! But later… I promise!” Kiba exclaimed, sitting down in the back row.
After a few minutes they were able to figure out that it was a medieval play about a young King and his evil uncle, the normal, pretty straightforward play. The King jumped off the stage as a few guards came out from behind the curtains. He ran through the crowd, passing Naruto and Kiba as he ducked behind some barrels, in the back of theater.
“There they are,” Sasuke said, pointing to Kiba and Naruto in the back of theater as he and Shikamaru walked in.
They walked to the back joining their friends for the show.
“Why’d you guys come in here?” Shikamaru asked.
“Naruto ran in here cause if I tickled him here, he’d make a see,” Kiba growled.
“Aah,” Shikamaru replied as Naruto stuck out his tongue.
Just then the evil uncle came out, his staff banging against the floor with every step he took.
“WHERE IS THE KING!?” He yelled.
The guards shook their heads, looking out over the audience.
“Idiots! Alright! I know that you know! Where is the king!” He shouted at the audience.
No one said anything.
“Fine! I’ll torture it out of you!” He said, pointing to the back of the room, “YOU! Get up here!”



A dim spotlight, rested on Shikamaru, who rolled his eyes and stood up, walking to the front of the theater where the guards grabbed him, pushing him to the king.
“Where is the king!?” He yelled.
“How am I supposed to know?” Shikamaru asked, unaware that the he was hiding behind the barrels in the back of the room.
“Playing tough, eh?” The villain asked, “Fine! Guards! Restrain him!”
The large men pushed him forward, lifting him up onto a table that was pushed into from behind the curtains. They locked his ankles into the braces on the table and did the same with his waist. They took off his jacket, stretching his arms above his head and locking them there with the cuffs that hung from the ceiling.
“So I’ll ask one more time. Where. Is. The. King?” The man asked.
“And I’ll tell you again. I. Don’t. Know!” Shikamaru protested, quickly testing out the bonds.
“Fine then! Guards! Do it,” He said menacingly.
The guards walked over to the helpless ninja, the first one behind him and the other at his feet. The first guard dug his fingers into Shikamaru’s armpits, drawing small circles with his fingers squeezing the sensitive flesh under his mesh shirt. Shikamaru giggled, trying to get away as the second guard began to remove his shoes. He held his feet together, trying stop him, but the guards’ hands were to strong. He ripped them off, wiggling his fingers against the ninja’s ticklish arches.
“Aaaahahahahahahahahahahaha! Heeeehehehehehehehehey! Wh-whaaahahahahahahat aaahahahahahareeeehehehehehe yohohohohohou doooooohohohoohohohohohoing!?” Shikamaru said, through his laughter, already giggling from the attack on his pits. “PleeeheheheheheheheEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEASE! STAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP! AAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!” He yelled as the man began to tickle his feet.



The men stopped and the man walked up an eyebrow raised.
“Are you ready to talk?” He asked.
“I… don’t… know… where… he… is!” Shikamaru insisted.
“Alright then! Guards!” He yelled as the guards started up again.
The first guard started to tickled his stomach, pulling up Shikamaru’s mesh shirt to tickle his naval and flanks. The second guard, still down at his feet, left and came back with two feathers and began sawing them through the genin’s toes.
“AAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! PLEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHASE! I’M BEEEHEHEHEHEGING YOOOHOHOHOOHOHOHOHOHOU! STAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAP!” Shikamaru yelped, jerking away every time the first guard started to tickle his sides or right above the waistline.
The first guard kept tickling, moving out to Shikamaru’s most ticklish spot, his sides.
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! STAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP PLEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEASE! NOOOOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOT THEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEREEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE!” Shikamaru screamed, bucking around in his restraints.
The man held up his hands, ordering them to stop as he walked over to him.
“Hey kid, great job holding out, but you can tell us now,” He whispered out of character.
“I told you… I don’t… know… where… he is! I… just got here…” He panted back.
“Oops…” The man said, whispering to him that the king was in the back of the tent.
He stepped back and yelled, “Are you ready to talk!?”
“Y-yes…” Shikamaru said, still out of breath, “He’s hiding behind… the barrels…”
“GUARDS!”



The guards ran off the stage, grabbing the king and bringing him on stage as two new guards released Shikamaru, putting back on his shoes and jacket and helping him off the stage. He walked back to the other ninja and they walked out, while both Naruto and Kiba laughed as Shikamaru rolled his eyes, staring up into the sky.
“You’re ticklish!?” Kiba said astounded, looking at Shikamaru who began to blush, “I mean, I understand Naruto, but you!?”
“Yeah!” Naruto agreed, “…hey!”
“Yeah, I’m ticklish, so what, you guys are too. Now come on, let’s go do something else,” Shikamaru said, walking off.
“Yeah,” Sasuke agreed following him as Kiba and Naruto walked behind them.
“Hey look! A fun house!” Naruto said, pointing to a large tent.
“Cool!” Kiba said, walking up to it.
“Yeah, alright,” Shikamaru agreed.
“Sure,” Sasuke replied.
They walked into the tent, following a few golden signs into a small room. They walked up to the sign on the side which read ‘Welcome to the Festival’s Funhouse! Take off your shoes and enjoy the great fun house inside!’
“Ready to go?” Naruto asked, slipping off his shoes and putting them on a shelf.
“Yeah,” Shikamaru said, doing the same and walking through the curtain.
The rest followed, walking into a small room with two pathways, one leading up and another, going forwards.
“Cool,” Kiba noted, bouncing on the jelly-like floor.
“Yeah, great,” Sasuke said sarcastically, walking through the bottom path.
“I dunno, it’s kinda fun,” Shikamaru argued, walking after him as Naruto ran up the stairs to the left.
“Whatever, wait up Naruto!” Kiba yelled, running after him.
“Look!” Naruto said, pointing to the hallway ahead.
Ahead, large bags swung back and forth in each one in a different direction.



“That doesn’t look hard!” Kiba exclaimed, taking a step forwards.
He started walking, getting ready to dodge the first bag when he started giggling. The bag hit him in the chest, flinging him back where he jumped back up, his face red.
“What was that?” Naruto asked, grinning.
“The floor’s covered in feathers…” He said, still blushing.
“Oh… let’s just run!” Naruto yelled, running through the hallway with Kiba right behind him, both of them laughing the whole time. They passed the hallway quickly and Kiba ran into the next small room, which had two tubes attached. Naruto came up behind him and they took separate tubes, Naruto the left and Kiba the right. Kiba’s tube turned out to be along slide that he slid down, ending up on the bottom level with Shikamaru and Sasuke who had just gotten to the same place. Naruto’s tube however went only a few feet, forcing him to exit on a long, thin rope bridge that swung back and forth with every movement. Naruto crept along, trying to keep his balance and not fall off.
“Be careful Naruto! You don’t wanna fall!” Kiba teased, reaching up on his tiptoes and rocking the bridge.
“DON’T!” Naruto yelled, holding out his arms to keep his balance.
Sasuke smirked, walking directly underneath the blonde boy, reaching up and tickling his sole between the ropes.
Naruto burst out laughing, stumbling above them and almost falling. Sasuke reached up again, this time with both hands, but Naruto was ready. He dropped onto his belly, grabbing Sasuke’s hands as they came up and pulling them through the holes.
“Hey! Let me out!” Sasuke yelled, struggling to get his hands free.



“Oh no! All of us have been tickled tonight, what about you? Are you ticklish?” Naruto replied, standing up slowly and running along the bridge and down to the bottom level.
“No way! Only babies are ACK!” Sasuke started as Kiba poked his side.
“What was that, Baby?” Kiba asked.
“It’s troublesome, but only fair if you get tickled too,” Shikamaru sighed, reaching into his pocket and pulling out a small rope.
He dropped to his knees, tying Sasuke’s feet together and the tying the other end to the rope of them, suspending Sasuke in mid-air in a sitting position.
“Yeah! It’s your turn!” Naruto said, as Kiba began to tickle Sasuke’s feet, wiggling his fingers around the sides and then on the arches.
“Heeeheheheheheheheehehehey! Dooohohohohohohohohohon’t! Staaaaahahahahahahahap! NOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOT THE AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHARCHES!” He yelled, immediately giggling.
“Don’t stop?” Naruto asked, “If you insist!”
He walked behind the Uchiha, digging into his sides and making Sasuke jump. Shikamaru sighed, walking closer to his fellow ninja and pulling up his shirt so he could tickle his stomach.
“AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! GUYS STAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP! PLEEEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHASE! I’M TICKLISH! AAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Sasuke yelped, as his friends tickled him senseless.
“No, really!?” Naruto asked sarcastically, making Shikamaru sigh.
“Yeah! You’re not as ticklish as Naruto though!” Kiba said laughing.
“Shut up!” Naruto yelled, blushing.
The continued to tickled their raven-haired friend until Naruto got tired of tickling his sides and decided to go under the shirt and tickle Sasuke’s bare underarms. Sasuke exploded, a whole new level of laughter pouring out of him as his rival tickled his most ticklish spot.
“AAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! NAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHARUTO! STAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP! NOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOT! THEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHERE! PLEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEASE! AAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Sasuke screamed, bucking so hard that the ropes around his ankles snapped and his hands wiggled through the holes.
He fell to the ground with a loud thud and got up quickly, brushing himself of as he blushed a deep red.
“Wow! Those armpits are ticklish!” Naruto exclaimed.
Sasuke growled, tackling him to the ground and putting him in a leg lock and tickling his feet.
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! SAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHASUKE! STAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP!” Naruto yelled, quickly squirming from Sasuke’s grasp.
They got up and started to walk back out side with Kiba and Shikamaru following behind.


The guys left, grabbing their stuff and walking towards the fair’s exit. They stopped right after exiting, turning to each other and looking serious.
“So, tonight never happened,” Sasuke said, looking at all of them.
“Right,” They all replied, turning from each other and walking off in different directions.
Here's a new tickling story. I know I haven't done one in awhile, but I just haven't really had any ideas! Hopefully that'll change... ^^;
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capitalofawesome Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why are you so perfect?!
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Student Writer
Haha, I just try a whole lot and believe in myself 😝
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capitalofawesome Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
May I write something fairly similar but with a different fandom?
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Student Writer
If you mean just using the same scenarios, sure! It'd be nice if you could link me for credit, but regardless please do! I'd love to read it. What fandom??
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capitalofawesome Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
idk...I was thinking either DBZ, Invader Zim, or Kuroshitsuji (Black Butler)
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Student Writer
Well i've never seen any of those, but yeah if u want to go for it!
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fictionfeather-pony Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
 This is my fave tickle story on Deviantart now. LOVE IT! :love:
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SilverMikazuki129 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Student Writer
Aww, thank you! I'm glad!
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Zannorith Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
This was to awsome :)
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WildlifeVet Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
I love this story. It makes me smile every time i read it. Keep up the good work
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