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The Ticklish Fire Prince

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One night, when Toph was walking back to the main hall of the Airbending temple, she noticed a small whole in the wall. When, she looked at it more closely, it gave her a great idea. The night Zuko, pleaded to join the group, he burned her feet, and she was REALLY blinded for a whole day.

Later that night, she went to Zuko and asked, "Hey, Zuko, do you think you could help me with something."
"Sure," Zuko replied.

After dinner Toph led Zuko to the hole and said,"I was playing with my bracelet and I threw far into that hole and for some reason, I can't bend it out or see anything in there."
"Well, that's strange, but I 'll get it," he said, crawling into the hole.
He kept crawling until all that was only his feet were sticking out."Hey Toph, I think I'm at the end of the tunnel and I don't think its here," Zuko said.
"Right," Toph said, smiling mischievously, "This is for burning my feet."
"What is, Ah!" Zuko yelled as Toph earthbended the hole shut around his body, restricting his movements so much, that all he could do was move his feet, a little.

"Now, what to do?" Toph said, grinning evilly.

"Zuko, now that you're a part of our team, I can't hurt you, but that doesn't mean I can't get revenge!" Toph said.
"What do you mean?" Zuko asked.
"I mean, I'm going to take off these little boots and see if these wittle footsies are ticklish," Toph, said, maniacally.
"NOOO! Please don't tickle me," Zuko yelled.
"Why, is the Fire Price ticklish?" Toph asked in a babying tone.
"Yes, its my biggest weakness, Azula used to tickle me all the time," Zuko stated.
"Sorry, Zuko, but I can't resist," Toph said, as she slipped of his boots, revealing his soft pale soles. She started to drag her fingers lightly all over his feet, causing him to gasp and giggle. She kept on, until she reached a spot at the top, middle of his arches, right under the ball of his feet.
When she reached there Zuko shrieked with laughter, "AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOOOOOO HEHEHEHAHAHIHI DON'T HAHAHA STOP!"
"Oh, don't stop okay, if you say so," Toph teased. "Looks like I found a sweet spot," She said, tickling that spot again.
"PLEEASE DON'T TICKLE ME ANY MORE AHAHAHA PLEASE I CAN'T TAKE IT HAHAHA," Zuko screamed. "NOOO DON'T TICKLE THERE EITHER HAHAHAHA AHAHAHHA NOOHOHOHAHA HIHIHIHA!" he screamed, as she tickled under and between his toes.

"I think its time to try something different," Toph said.

"I'll be right back. Don't go anywhere; HAHA!" Toph said as she walked way.
Meanwhile, Zuko was desperately trying to escape, unfortunately for him, he was completely unsucsessful. "I've got to get free, she's only tickling my feet now, and I'm already becoming hysterical, and they're only my 2nd most ticklish spot. What if she decides to move spots," Zuko thought to himself.
"I'm back," Toph said. As soon as she had finished, she started smearing some kind of stuff all over Zuko's feet.
"Wha-haha-t are you-hoho dooing?" Zuko asked through his giggles.
"Oh, just feeding Momo," Toph said.
"What do you me-HEHEHAHAHA NOOOOOHOHOH PLEASE DON'T HAHAHAHA WHAT ARE HAHA YOUHOOHOOO DOOING AHAHAHA!" Zuko asked, laughing hysterically as Momo lapped the food off his feet, all over the arches, in between his toes and right on his sweet spot.
"Like I said, I'm feeding Momo some berries, I made into jam," Toph said, laughing herself.
"PLEEEASE DON'T HAHAHA FEED HIM HEHEHAHA SOMETHING ELSE HAHAHAHA!" Zuko pleaded. Zuko was really laughing hysterically, so Toph let him have a little break.

"Okay Zuko, let's move to somewhere else" Toph said.
"NO!" Zuko yelled.
"Oh, is there somewhere else on you that's even more ticklish than your tootsies?" Toph, probed, inquisitively.
"No, no not at all, I just don't want any more tickling," he said.
"Sure, I'll just stop now," Toph said, her voice dripping with sarcasm. Toph pushed Zuko into the rock all the way, and by also using her earthbending, turned him vertically, pulled him into an X formation and then bought his body out of the rock except for his arms, from his elbows to his hands and his legs, from his knees to his toes. She then decided to tickle his worst spot, his pits!

Toph started to untie his robe while he was pleading profusely for her to just let him go, once she had untied it, she cut it off with a knife and started to tickle his arm pits, Zuko exploded, "NOOOOOHOHOHO HAHAHAHAHAHA PLEEEHEHEASE STOHAHAP DOHOHON'T DOHOOHOO THIS! HAHAHAHAHA HIHIHIHI NOOOOOO HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA AHAAHAHAAAH PLEHEHEASE JUHAHAST STOHAHAP! I CAN'T TAKE IT HAHAHAHA PLEASE DON'T TICKLE HAHAHA MY PITS HAHAHAHA! THEY'RE MY MOHOHOST TICKLISH SPOHAHAHAT," Zuko cried as he laughed his head off.
"Wow, Zuko your pits are insanely ticklish!" Toph exclaimed, giving Zuko a small break.
"YA THINK!" Zuko yelled.
"Hey don't yell at me, at least I didn't hurt you," she stated, "Just for that I'm going to have to tickle you some more."
"NO PLEASE DOHOHOHON'T HAHAHA," yelled Zuko as Toph tickled his ribs and stomach. "I REALLY CAN'T HAHAHA TAKE ANY MOHOHOHORE! Please," he screamed again, as Toph started to slow down. Just then Toph leaned in close and blew a huge raspberry into Zuko's belly-button, causing him to convulse into hysterical laughter all over again. "NOOOOHOHOHO HAHAHAHAHAHA!" he shrieked as she blew more raspberries.

Finally, as her finale she decides to tickle his feet again.
"I think, you've almost had enough" Toph said, " I'll just tickle your feet a little more and then, I'll let you out."
"HA, my feet are trapped in rock and if you take either one out I'll be able to break free!" Zuko pointed out.
"Who, says I'll need to take them out of the rock to tickle them," she said.
"Then how will you..." Zuko started, just then, Toph started to make the earth aroungd Zuko's feet, have little ridges, and then made it vibrate causing him to laugh out loud, all over again," HAHAHAHA HOOW ARE YOUHOOHOO DOOING THAHAHAT! STOOHAHAP I'M REALLY HAHAREALLY SORRY ABOUHAHAT BUNING YOURHEHEHE FEEHEHEHET!"

"Oh, alright, I guess you've had enough," Toph said, releasing him from the rock.
"Thanks, please don't do that ever again," Zuko begged.
"Well, I'm not making any promises, but, I'll try," Toph replied.
"Come on, we're even now, let's go back and join the others," Zuko said.
"Yeah, your right, let's go," Toph agreed giving him one last poke before they walked off towards base camp.
Here's one on Zuko sorry it took a while.
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